From: Ray Gates (home) [gatesray@home.com]
Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2001 10:40 PM
To: Dan Gillman
Subject: More comments on PDTR 20943-3


Dan,

A couple more quick comments.  In the tabular examples in clause 5.3:

1) wherever a Datatype is specified, a Datatype Scheme is also required.

2) change all "unit of quantity" to "unit of measure".

Regards,
Ray Gates